Can you review my album Towards Negative

[keremavl]

 

[keremavl]

I've enjoyed the diverse textures, the experimentation with rhythm and tempo changes. The 'winding' , stream of conscious flow is nice after doing so much of my own songwriter structured music. It's a great album for sketching or making art. Some of it feels like being in a game, other moments are more meditative. Experimentation with harmony and out of key melodies takes me on unexpected journeys.

I have to say I felt the intro of the first track was not pulling me in immediately, it seemed very 'stock' and then things got more interesting. That would be my main critique of the album. the first 20-30 seconds is not representative of your main style and may cause impatient listeners to bail out. That's not necessarily a problem, I might just put a stronger intro in your first track since so many people will be evaluating the rest of the album by it.

Thanks for the review youre right about the first 20-30 seconds i was kinda feeling same with that part. The reason behind it is i was promised myself for releasing an album before school. Unfortunitely i didnt make any music on summer till the last week. In the last week i was really sad about this situation that i didnt have done anything in the summer so i picked some interesting projects that are unfinished. Then I finished them. The projects that i choose was irrelevant with each other. Anyways i could probably take more time for the intro.
Thank you so much for listening to my album, it makes me really happy.